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AT LAST!!! 

I'VE FINALLY FINISHED THE REVISED VERSION OF CHAPTER ONE OF MY FIRST NOVEL. I JOINED ELFWOOD ABOUT FOUR MONTHS AGO AND POSTED MY FIRST VERSION OF CHAPTER ONE - THE TALES OF FAGELIO ON ELFWOOD.

AFTER SOME VERY TALENTED PEOPLE COMMENTED ON MY WORK AND HELPED ME I REALISED IT WAS RUBBISH!! =P

SOOOOO... 

I TOOK IT AWAY AND RE WORKED IT AND NOW... WELL IT'S NOT PERFECT BUT WHAT IS???

ANYWAY, I APPRECIATE HOW IT HELPS AND WHAT YOU CAN LEARN FROM OTHER PEOPLE SO ANY COMMENT IS WELCOME IN MY LIBRARY.

THE CHAPTER HAS BEEN SPLIT UP INTO 4 PARTS. NOT THAT IT REALLY WARRENTS IT. I JUST DID IT MORE FOR THE EASE OF READING.

DUM, DUM, DUM!!

HERE THEY ARE...

http://www.elfwood.com/libr/s/n/snugglebunny/ttof___chapter_one___part_1.wps.htm.html

http://www.elfwood.com/libr/s/n/snugglebunny/ttof___chapter_one___part_2.wps.htm.html

http://www.elfwood.com/libr/s/n/snugglebunny/ttof___chapter_one___part_3.wps.htm.html

http://www.elfwood.com/libr/s/n/snugglebunny/ttof___chapter_one___part_4.wps.htm.html

IT'S NOT THAT LONG I PROMISE.

IF ANYONE COMMENTS ON MY WORK I ALWAYS MAKE AN EFFORT TO RETURN THE FAVOUR!!

TIME FOR ME TO GET COMMENTING!!

=P

 

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(Anonymous)
Apr. 13th, 2011 07:16 am (UTC)
Can't wait to get involved
Hey - I am certainly delighted to discover this. Good job!
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